Project CoTH is well underway. Still, not everything is concrete, especially my characters. This journal's purpose is the appearance of Corrin Jacy, the main character. She was, as I first started out this story, a copper-curled, golden-eyed thief with pale skin.
Now, recently, she's become burgundy-red/auburn ALTOGETHER DARKER RED SORTA WITH BLACK, black-eyed imbued with gold tinting/facets, and pale skin and freckles.
I need your opinion, especially those of you who read the first, rudimentary foundations of the story before I took it down.
For those who didn't;
Corrin Jacy is a thief of the lower city in Hyrellis, capitol of the kingdom of Korusel, a land mass of Luros, realm of Aitroseais. SHe's spunky, sullen, hostile, prickly, headstrong, ornery, and can't follow orders to save her life. Or anyone's life, for that matter. Corrin is betrothed to her best friend, Sakerel of Garren, a knight of Korusel, the best swordsmen in the realm, until he betrays her to the palace guard and she is sentenced to death. But instead she is "rescued" by none other than Prince Garreth of Soren, heir to the throne of Korusel. You see, he'd like to do away with her as much as everyone else. Everyone else, that is, except for the gang, the Guild of thieves or GOT. But Garreth has a problem. The kingdom to the south, Oasis, has been overthrown by rebel forces and has declared war.
He makes our little, ornery, independent, I-don't-need-you-or-anyone-else teen an offer that she can't refuse. Well, if she does, she's dead. He has the servants drag her off to the barracks to get cleaned up. She is to be an assassin. And she, along with the others at the Assassin's Academy of Luros/ NEEDS NAME are being taken to camp of sorts. And then they have to infiltrate the palace and assassinate the asinine crap-substitute-royal-family. One problem...Corrin didn't know that girls could be knights, and she finds out in the worst way possible....
This is the story of Corrin and Sakerel, The Guild of thieves, a kingdom on the brink of war, Orsia and Kendra of Rothman, and the female knight errants of the purge.
This story cannot be read up on my profile yet, but two chapters are up on wattpad.com Here's the link to the joint novel, the story of Kendra and Orsia and the purge of Oasis. [link] The prologue was written by moi. I'm posting a poll about this also.
So, guys, burgundy and ______ feel free to suggest eye color. OOOH!! One more important thing, Orsia and the others, COrrin and such, their shifters. Almost everyone in Luros is born with a piece of their soul concealed inside of something. It's a horcrux of sorts. It can be anything from a pocketwatch to a pebble. That piece of their soul harnesses an animal spirit. Orsia's shift, for instance, is a bengal tiger.
When I was younger there was this book series called animorphs where the animal sort of can control them. That's sort of like this, if they don't have the mindset or the willpower/ skill the animal can overtake them.
So, what will it be, I won't guarantee I'll genuinely pick your choice but I'm indecisive. So, here goes.
Burgundy and gold/black
Burgundy and gold all out
Burgundy and ____________
Red and gold
Red and _________
Red and copper______
Hair's copper anyway, by red I mean copper
red and brass
Burgundy and brass
GIVE ME IDEAS!!!!!
Give me ideas for part placement/bangs style.